A simple longing

A simple longing

A simple longing

​Here in the clamorous night

my fingers upon your mouth

the summer birds seek shores 

untouched by rain,

silver and silent in their flight.

And I can think of no greater joy

beneath these wild oyster stars

than to fall asleep in the cold grass

and be licked awake by daylight.

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  1. Marvelous poem. Loved the vivid imagery and the contrasts that really work well together, “clamorous night” and “silver and silent flight” of the birds. Beautiful.
    Thank you for sharing.

  2. I hope I’m following your blog. I signed up to do so anyway. I so wanted to comment on one of your posts that I found on my reader which means I guess that I was following you then at least and I could find no comment box. Do you close comments on some of your posts? It really was a very lovely and profound paragraph that I found and I really wanted to be able to tell you that, but now I don’t even remember which post it was. Blessings, Natalie 🙂 <3

    1. Hi Natalie! Thank you so much for following and for reading. I don’t close comments, so I’m not sure why you weren’t able to post… The only thing I can think is that, whilst I show the entire post on my home page rather than just an excerpt, you have to click on the title to the actual blog post page to write a response. Either way, it’s lovely to have you as a reader and I enjoy visiting your blog for some calming inspiration! 🙂

      1. Hi! I did click over and read the whole thing but it was in the reader on my phone so maybe that was the problem! I’m just sorry I didn’t get to tell you how wonderful it was‼️❌⭕️ Thanks for you kind words about my blog😊❤️

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